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sol s⊙therland 🔸's avatar

poem game strong, Chevanne!

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Chevanne Scordinsky's avatar

Thank you! 😊

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Najah Amatullah's avatar

I love your first poem so much. I’m working on a project that emphasizes how often I use music as imagery in my poems. I just feel like they go together.

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Chevanne Scordinsky's avatar

Thank you! Music tickles a lot of senses so it’s natural.

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Najah Amatullah's avatar

I could read and re-read that second one. The stubborn tenacity. The whole idea! So good!

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Chevanne Scordinsky's avatar

Haha! Thank you! We really don’t learn and sometimes need that hard lesson. It’s rough being human.

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J. Curtis's avatar

Totally caught off guard by breakfast burning…but it’s so relatable. Great visuals!

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Chevanne Scordinsky's avatar

Thank you! What a way to get thrown out of your imagination. 🙃

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Jenny Ghost's avatar

while breakfast burns... so good!

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Chevanne Scordinsky's avatar

Thanks! Daydreams will do that to you.

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Jenny Ghost's avatar

I agree😂

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