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I really enjoyed this! I could picture the whole thing but kept expecting it to take some weird Hitchcockian turn. Which I would have STILL enjoyed!

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Thanks! Glad you could capture the visuals. I’m more a Twilight Zone gal myself, but what did you have in mind?

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Oh gosh. I couldn't say. Just that I felt it turning dark somewhere? I also was expecting Tom to take Raymond's lady, but that is probably the cynic in me.

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Ah, there’s always a bit of dark in me so I guess that comes out. Maybe I should write the continuation in spring... 🤔

Tom’s oddly unlucky, but loyal and a gentleman.

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