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It's a good 100, but I'd take the bold off the one sentence. Unless you have an important reason for doing it I'm not privy to, it just felt distracting to me.

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Although the setting is decades ago, the message remains that no one can say what’s real journalism or content that matters. It’s almost speaking to the reader.

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You don't think the prose itself sells that message? Because I thought it did.

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Fair point.

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Jan 27, 2022Liked by Chevanne Scordinsky

I love reading and writing characters who smoke 😏🚬

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It was my first time! It’s a good prop but can represent much more if you’d like.

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Jan 28, 2022Liked by Chevanne Scordinsky

It is a good prop! But no no no, just do your thing, however it goes 😊

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