It's a good 100, but I'd take the bold off the one sentence. Unless you have an important reason for doing it I'm not privy to, it just felt distracting to me.
Although the setting is decades ago, the message remains that no one can say what’s real journalism or content that matters. It’s almost speaking to the reader.
I love reading and writing characters who smoke 😏🚬
It was my first time! It’s a good prop but can represent much more if you’d like.
It is a good prop! But no no no, just do your thing, however it goes 😊
It's a good 100, but I'd take the bold off the one sentence. Unless you have an important reason for doing it I'm not privy to, it just felt distracting to me.
Although the setting is decades ago, the message remains that no one can say what’s real journalism or content that matters. It’s almost speaking to the reader.
You don't think the prose itself sells that message? Because I thought it did.
Fair point.