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Chandra's avatar

oh the mystery with the corpse is fascinating + even that last bit is captivating with the description of the atmosphere in the chambers, the intrigue of "ooo I wonder if the mysterious death has something to do with this private company"

great start!

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Chevanne Scordinsky's avatar

Thank you so much for reading.

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Claudia Befu's avatar

Captivating start, I love the pace, the atmosphere, the style, it reminds me of classic sci-fi stories I used to read and love during my childhood. 👏

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Chevanne Scordinsky's avatar

Thanks so much! I was hoping for it to feel familiar.

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Claudia Befu's avatar

You did a great job! I'll continue reading tonight. 😁

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Elizabeth Marro's avatar

Chevanne, this is a compelling start. The bonus: listening to you read. You have a fantastic reading voice!

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Chevanne Scordinsky's avatar

Thank you!

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Dia Lupo's avatar

I second this comment! On top of the vivid story, I could listen to you read all day, Chevanne. More please!

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Chevanne Scordinsky's avatar

Orders will be ready weekly. 🧑🏾‍🍳

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Chevanne Scordinsky's avatar

Yes, it did! I decided on the audio before the first episode release. I figured it would be more accessible to have both.

Just a regular graze through the grass until you notice three moons. 😊

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