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deletedApr 19, 2023Liked by Chevanne Scordinsky
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Oct 24, 2022Liked by Chevanne Scordinsky

Chevanne, this is a compelling start. The bonus: listening to you read. You have a fantastic reading voice!

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Nov 21, 2022Liked by Chevanne Scordinsky

Captivating start, I love the pace, the atmosphere, the style, it reminds me of classic sci-fi stories I used to read and love during my childhood. 👏

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oh the mystery with the corpse is fascinating + even that last bit is captivating with the description of the atmosphere in the chambers, the intrigue of "ooo I wonder if the mysterious death has something to do with this private company"

great start!

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