Welllll... I was expecting the town to be a trap. They go down and find folks, but Ray and Lauren get killed and their bodies drained for water. Ahem. Sorry, my mind tends to go to dark places when it comes to fiction LMAO.
Ooo… I mean, yes. My mind goes there are well. Just trying to think if there’s an interesting angle to take. Is the town slightly off or is the world Ray and Lauren live in the real fake?? 😱
"This was a tricky one, but the clue was in the title! It’s a play off the lyric “make sure you’re connected” off the song “Connected” by Stereo MC’s. "
I haven't heard this in quite a while! No way I would've ever gotten that one right. Lol.
Definitely makes me want to read more!
Thank you!
This story is excellent - just caught up on all three! Great writing 😊
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.
I am glad I found this story Chevanne .It is interesting and looking forward to reading the next bit. Thanks for sharing.
Parts 2 and 3 are posted! You won’t have to wait in suspense. 😊
Looking forward to seeing where you go with this one. It's already very compelling.
Thank you! I have some time to mull over it. There’s some good ideas from readers.
Welllll... I was expecting the town to be a trap. They go down and find folks, but Ray and Lauren get killed and their bodies drained for water. Ahem. Sorry, my mind tends to go to dark places when it comes to fiction LMAO.
“Soylent Green is people!!”
Ooo… I mean, yes. My mind goes there are well. Just trying to think if there’s an interesting angle to take. Is the town slightly off or is the world Ray and Lauren live in the real fake?? 😱
What if they're both true?
Or both fake? :D
Then what is reality and have they ever really seen it??
It's the Matrix all over again LOL.
Hahaha! Dammit! We do not need a sequel!
A mind-bender. I like it.
"This was a tricky one, but the clue was in the title! It’s a play off the lyric “make sure you’re connected” off the song “Connected” by Stereo MC’s. "
I haven't heard this in quite a while! No way I would've ever gotten that one right. Lol.
What inspired me to make it so hard?? 🤣
It was fun though. Nice little Easter egg.
Neat story! And that's a great lead with The Sample. Have you submitted yours?
I did submit mine. I got a couple subscriptions from it, but it hasn’t been long.
Hey a couple is a couple 😄